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martes, 9 de mayo de 2017

Afro-American Situation

Dear Stephie.

How are you? i hope that fine. I am writing to you to tell you about the Afro-american situation.
In the city of Jackson Mississippi, where I live, the issue of racism is always growing, black people work as house helps for white people, they treat them like if they transmitted deseases. Also, black people are subjected to mistreatment and work for them as a lifestyle. Moreover,the children that the servants take care, grow up and become their employer.
Moreover, a situation that called my attention is that the can´t shear the same bath as their own use because with people claim that black people have different types of diseases and can be contagious.
For that reason; servants couldn't use the same bath as white people because it is clean and they had to have their own bath outside of the house.
Another situation that called my attention is when the son of a servant had an accident while his mother was working, and they took him to an exclusive hospital for black people, leaving him outside the hospital and he finally died.
In my opinion, I don't agree with all this, and i want to change it. I would like to know what you think about all this situation. I look foward to your answer.

Much love,

Martina.

2 comentarios:

  1. The place is Jackson, Mississippi. Careful with referent in THEY.
    Maids, the word is house helps.
    People do not contain, they have them. Find another linker instead of Eventually.

    A black hospital is a hospital for black people? Please change that.

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