Helping students to deliver a presentation

In this proposal i will describe the different problems students have with spoken presentations and suggest how these problems could be overcome.
When students have to deliver a presentation in front of the audience they get nervous and also forget what they have to say, for that reason at that moment they ignore their audience. The main problem is that they sometimes say the information by heart, so they start hesitating.Moreover they use inappropiate content and the lack of internet connection would be another problem.
I would suggest somes recommendarion for students that have to delivered a presentation:

• Use appropriate language 
• Self'-confidence 
• Looking for key terms providing new sources
• Have a prendrive in order to save the presentation 

with this last recommendation, students make sure to give the presentation in case there are technical problem

The Bad Luck

 Part 1: 
Tom was walking very happily by the street .It was a sunny day. The birds were singing. It was a beautiful day. There were clounds, Bright sushine iluminated the window. Each window had a bird´s nest. The flowers were in bloom, whit many colurs. Tom was happily walking down the city street and people were going to their respective place. 
Suddenly the black, ugly, with long, dirty,  nails, dark, scary , evil cat , all dirty, and abandoned, with fleas and ticks, passed in from of him. Tom was scared of seeing a cat as ugly as a monster. Those nails were scary , Tom got scared and ran to a side letting the cat pass. In one moment Tom started to run from the horrible cat.

The Black Car

Suddenly when they went home and they saw that the car was infront of the house, they quickly call the police, they told them that a car were follow them, the police man start asking them some questions about the car, they told the him that the car was black, big and suspicious. The police then ask the telephone numbers, and called perry’s number and said that they have found the car but nobody was inside, perry was so happy that he told to his friends.
Martina Pilarche (86 words)

Moral: In any suspicious situation,ask an adult for help.
                                  

Formal letter

Mr John Spencer ,
                             First of all  , I am going to introduce my self. My name is Steve Dawson. I am 16 years old and I attend to Newlands school in Adrogue.
At the moment I am having problems with Language so , as Max Spencer, your son is really good at this subject, I would like he could help me with this subject which is a real problem for me.
I hope you will let him meet you must infrom me about the price I should pay for it. Looking forword to your regevding  this matter as soon as possible.
                                                                     Your sincerely.
Dave Dawson.

Informal letter

 Dear Hyde :

I write this letters because the last day a dog bited me and i had to go to the doctor and he said me that i had to get a vaccin. I explained  what  happened  this , last day i go with my sister to a parck and one dog camming to me and i pat and the dog look something and  bark , so i close to him to calm but the dog dosn´t do it.

So he bite my face. Doctor you understand me said? And he said me yes I undertand you a lot and i know that you are not so good i think that you have to take a medicine to keep your face good please i will give you the name of the medicine you would have to take.

10 days letter my face was beautiful it looks that nothing happens to me i am so happy  because the doctor cured mi face a lot. I want to see you.

KISSES

                          Dr. Jeckyll